Sunday, May 3, 2009

1st Poem I wrote in 5th Class

This is my first ever poem, a small 6 lines on letter box... still remember it :)

Letterbox प्यारा प्यारा,
सबका प्यारा और दुलारा

ताले में एक बड़ी सी ताली,
चिट्ठी मुंह में सबने डाली,

लोगों की चिट्ठी पहुंचता,
सबको है ये बड़ा ही भाता

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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12 comments:

  1. Blueberry Gumlin :DMay 4, 2009 at 12:09 PM

    :p nice!

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  2. AbhiMay 5, 2009 at 3:48 AM

    thnx bubble..

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  3. UnknownMay 6, 2009 at 2:31 PM

    abhi..write sch poems in the thread also na.. atleast kuch toh intrstin hoga :D
    nwys a good one :)

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  4. vishalMay 7, 2009 at 1:28 AM

    woaah.. a poet in d makin.. sweet n simple! :D
    gud 1 bro!! :)

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  5. AbhiMay 9, 2009 at 5:37 AM

    @shivani

    ab thread mein likhta hoon to kehti hai ki faltu shayri karta hai :P

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  6. AbhiMay 9, 2009 at 5:38 AM

    @vishal

    yeah old sweet memories.. abhi collg ke baad se koi poem likhi hi nahi...

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  7. darkyMay 15, 2009 at 10:25 PM

    hUh>!??
    waTt launGUage is ThT>?

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  8. PremMay 17, 2009 at 6:53 PM

    u remember ur class 5 poem
    not bad

    y dont u chk out mine n leave ur cmnts

    www.stolentips.blogspot.com

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  9. asra :)May 18, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    This innocence is still there in you :D

    Sweet poem though! I'd never seen a post-box in reality until 1999 Just saw its pics. :p

    'Chithi munh mei sabne daali' -- my favourite line :D

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  10. AbhiMay 19, 2009 at 1:02 PM

    @Darky

    rehne de,, dimaag mat laga.. thak jayega :P

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  11. AbhiMay 19, 2009 at 1:04 PM

    @neo thnx yaar

    @asra -- innocenece to bahut hai mere mein.. :)

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  12. darkyMay 20, 2009 at 3:25 AM

    haDD ho GAyIi!
    Tu behsram HAi!

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